How to Be a Human - Chapter 1

The cover image I have just posted is nothing to do with a book I am reading.  Rather, it is the front cover that PDB11 very kindly designed for a book that I have written.  This began several in 2018 when I tried writing a story gently making fun of fanfiction tropes (particularly in fics where Severus Snape or Darth Vader survives).  In my original story, Gardas in Fenland, a character from an (imaginary) fantasy series dies, only to discover that fans are determined to resurrect him, and are all choosing different futures for him, and he has to decide which fanfic he wants to live in.
It was meant to be a one-off.  But having created Gardas, I found that he wouldn't let go of my imagination, and that I actually needed to write novels about him.  I reworked much of the plot and setting, so please don't assume that anything that is true of the Gardas of 'Gardas in Fenland', and of the world-building in that version, is true of the characters and setting of How to Be a Human and sequels.  'Gardas in Fenland' was just a first sketch of a character I realised I wanted to develop more.

So, in 2019 I wrote How to Be a Human, and in 2020 I followed it with How to Talk to Shadows.  There's a third story, How to Heal a Severed Soul, which I began work on in 2020 and ground to a halt, not because I didn't know where the story was going, but because it was so close to my own mental problems that I couldn't cope with writing any more of it.  It still hasn't let go of my imagination, and I still want to complete it, but at the moment I've got other projects on.

Anyway, the purpose of this blog post is to include the first chapter of How to Be a Human, and to ask you: would you like me to post the rest of this on my blog?  Or would you prefer to read it on Archive Of Our Own?

Gardas wasn’t sure why his trial wasn’t taking place in the Walled City.  For the past two weeks, he had been held prisoner in what looked as though it had been a cowshed, with a magic-restraining collar around his neck so that he couldn’t use his powers, and his hands and feet shackled to prevent any more mundane means of escape.  Not that Gardas had fancied his chances of escape anyway.  Quite apart from the large troll guards stationed outside – not the local trolls of the Downs, who were mostly pale, sickly creatures, but craggy-featured grey trolls from the hills to the west – he had been too ill most of the time even to try.  Whenever he tried to remember what had happened, he had felt dizzy and confused, and sometimes even fainted.  Gardas hated being ill.  It reminded him of the pranks that Azalar, his master, had used to play on him when they were boys.

Azalar’s cousin Auric had come in to visit Gardas every day of his imprisonment, to bring him food and to reassure him not to worry.  Not about the past that he couldn’t remember (‘It wasn’t your fault.  You weren’t yourself,’), not about his upcoming trial (‘It’s all right; I’ll take care of you,’) and not about the dizzy spells (‘It might be some sort of hex Azalar put on you, or it might just be you making yourself sick with fretting.  Just concentrate on getting through today, and I’ll take you to a healer as soon as we get a chance,’).  This made a lot of things not to think about.  Gardas had spent most of his time seeing how many sit-ups and touch-toes he could do.

He supposed Auric must be his master now, since apparently Azalar was now dead.  Gardas was vaguely, guiltily aware that he seemed to have caused Azalar’s death, though he couldn’t remember the details.  At any rate, Auric didn’t think that anyone would be sorry about Azalar’s death as such – certainly, Auric himself didn’t seem to miss his cousin – but, nonetheless, there were horrible executions reserved for slaves who killed their masters.

Then again, was he still a slave?  Azalar’s parents had bought him when he was eleven, on the understanding that they would pay for his schooling up until the age of eighteen, after which he would pay them back by working for them or Azalar up to the age of twenty-five.  If he had shown enough promise for them to decide to send him to university up to the age of twenty-one, they might have gone on owning him until he was thirty-one, but Gardas couldn’t imagine them caring to do that.  Auric might have, if it had been up to him, but he and Azalar would have been only twenty, perhaps at university themselves or just starting their careers, by the time Gardas finished school.

But now, somehow, Auric, whom Gardas remembered as a young man of eighteen, was thirty-two, with a full, red-gold beard to counterpoint his light gold hair.  And Gardas himself, who had already been as tall as Azalar and rather taller than Auric when he was sixteen and they were eighteen, now towered over Auric like a mountain troll.  He was thirty, apparently, and his body looked lean and sinewy from what he could see of it.  Disappointingly, he still had a sprinkling of pimples (mostly on his back and buttocks, where he couldn’t reach to squeeze them), and his hair seemed to be already thinning, but Gardas had never worried much about his appearance.

At any rate, this morning Auric arrived earlier than usual, with clean clothes, a bucket of water, a towel, and a comb, to help Gardas get ready for his trial.  He began by persuading the duty troll to give him the keys to Gardas’s shackles, after which the troll locked them in together before Auric undid the heavy iron cuffs.  Next, Auric bathed the sore patches around Gardas’s wrists and ankles, anointed them with soothing ointment, and bandaged them.  ‘Not that putting the manacles back on is going to do you any good,’ he said apologetically.  ‘If you get off, I can heal you properly later, but it might help if the inquisitor and the jury feel a bit sorry for you.  In the meantime, do you want to wash yourself, or would it help if I did it?  It’s not a good idea getting your dressings wet, after all.’

Gardas wasn’t sure if complaining was going to get him into trouble, but he looked dubiously at the swirls of blood in the water.  Auric cast a purifying spell, followed by a warming spell.  Gardas stretched, wincing as the blood flowed into stiff muscles, then peeled off the grubby clothes that he had been wearing for the past two weeks, and briskly began rubbing himself down with the damp flannel.  It could have been worse, he knew.  At least the manacles had allowed him enough freedom of his hands to pull down his trousers when he needed to use the slop-bucket, and enough use of his legs to walk over to it.  All the same, while Gardas was not a fastidious man, going for two weeks without a change of underpants was something he hadn’t had to endure since before Azalar’s parents had bought him, and it was good to feel fresh and clean again.

When he had finished, he rubbed himself dry, dressed in a clean set of patched old clothes which covered even less of his long limbs than the previous ones had, and ran a comb through his hair.  The hair seemed to fall out in large clumps, as if he had aged much more than the fourteen years everyone said, though it was still black.  Finally, he let Auric lock the manacles back in place.  They wouldn’t fit over his bandaged wrists and ankles, and clenched uncomfortably tightly round his forearms and calves.  Auric hadn’t brought him any boots, and Gardas didn’t bother asking for them.  After all, Auric didn’t have to visit his cousin’s murderer at all, let alone give him the chance to wash and change his clothes.

Auric knocked on the door to let the guard-troll know it was safe to let them out.  Outside stood a skinny, dark-haired boy of perhaps ten – no, Gardas realised, at least twelve or thirteen, but short for his age – who glared at Gardas with undisguised hatred.  He had one arm in a sling, and wore the scorched remains of a school robe.  ‘Do I really have to testify in his defence?’ he asked Auric.  ‘Just because he…’

‘Enough,’ said Auric.  ‘You’ll have time to tell the whole story – the parts that reflect well on Gardas, and the parts that don’t – in due course.  But the court needs to hear Gardas’s own account first.’

‘I thought you said he couldn’t remember anything?’

‘That’s right.  Well, let’s go – and thank you for keeping him safe, sir,’ Auric added to the troll, who made no reply.

Auric led the way, with his left hand supporting Gardas’s right elbow as if he were escorting a friend rather than dragging a criminal slave to stand trial for his life.  Gardas didn’t know much about farms, having spent his early childhood in the shanty town that stood outside the City proper, but he realised that the stone building he had been kept in had once been part of a bigger complex of buildings – more animal stalls? – in the midst of the ruins of other buildings – barns full of crops?  The farmhouse itself?  Both the buildings and what might once have been fields were now blackened ruins.  Gardas had been expecting the countryside to be full of nettles and brambles.  As Auric gently levitated him a foot or so above the ground, to spare his bare feet over a pile of broken glass and sharp stones – and the charred remains of what looked like human bones – he thought that nettles might have been preferable.

Somehow, someone had managed to bring the Seat of Judgement from the Walled City to set it up in an open-air court which nestled in a hollow between the Downs.  He supposed the location made it easier for the crowds sitting on the charred slopes of the hills to hear what was going on.

Gardas realised that he recognised the place.  He and Beatrice and Azalar and Auric had been here only last year – or rather, back when he was sixteen.  These were the Holy Hills, with their carvings of a dragon, a griffin, a unicorn, and a werewolf.  Azalar, who was frightened of heights, had stayed down on the plains below, but he had allowed Gardas to go with Beatrice and Auric to scrambled around on the steep grassy slopes, casting cleansing spells to blast invading weeds off the white chalk surface.  It had been a beautiful sunny day, full of the sound of skylarks’ song and Beatrice’s laughter.  It was one of the best days of his life.  And now, there were only four blackened scorch marks to show where the carvings had been.  Who had worked all this destruction?  How was it even possible to blacken chalk?  And why?

A white-bearded wizard, evidently an inquisitor, motioned to Gardas to sit down on the Seat of Judgement.  The stone chair clamped him in place – not sprouting tendrils as enchanted wood might have done, but simply ensuring that his hands and feet were suddenly encased in hollows in the stone (tight hollows, which pressed painfully on his sore wrists and ankles) and that there were stone bars across his waist and neck.

‘Gardas,’ began the inquisitor (not Slave Gardas or Wizard Gardas, or Azalar’s Gardas or Auric’s Gardas, or anything that might give him a clue to his current status), ‘you are charged with a campaign of war crimes and intimidation taking place over the past fourteen years, including multiple counts of mass murder of both wizards and commoners, multiple counts of destruction of property, one count of grievous bodily harm to a child, and one count of destroying a wizard’s magic.  How do you plead?’

‘I can’t remember,’ said Gardas.  ‘I’m sorry, sir.’

‘You can’t remember, and yet you feel sorry?’ sneered the inquisitor.  Gardas had an uncomfortable feeling that he had met this inquisitor before – maybe been on trial in front of this inquisitor – though he couldn’t remember when or why.  He wanted to snap, ‘I meant I’m sorry I can’t answer your questions, you pompous git!’ but he couldn’t manage to get the words out.  He often couldn’t say much, especially in front of his betters, which included practically everyone.

He noticed that the inquisitor’s robes were nearly as old and shabby as the second-hand shirt and trousers that Auric had found somewhere for Gardas.  In fact, even though they were presumably in their best clothes for an important occasion, nearly everyone was dressed in rags.  People Gardas recognised and knew were wizards, including some of his old teachers, wore a random mixture of wizards’ robes and commoners’ trousers or dresses – and it wasn’t just the female wizards wearing dresses, which implied that some of the men would have liked to be still in robes, but no longer possessed them.  Had he caused such widespread devastation that people no longer had sheep to shear or fields to grow flax in? 

When they’d come out here before, there had been sheep grazing on the hills, and the fields had been a patchwork of sky-blue flax flowers, silver-blue-green unripe wheat, blossoming bean-plants, and grass waiting to turn into hay, with hedgerows between them, and even a few small patches of woodland.  They were mostly beeches, Beatrice had said, and had told him the legend of how beeches had come into existence thousands of years ago, when a young witch had fallen so much in love with the sun that she had turned herself into a tree in a misguided attempt to win his love, and how her human suitor had begged her not to leave him behind, so she had turned him into a boar who could eat the seeds at her feet.  Auric had said, ‘That’s really sad,’ and Gardas, who hadn’t wanted to admit how much the story moved him, had snorted, ‘That’s stupid!  When she loved a good man who loved her and wanted to marry her, why would she choose the sun, who couldn’t marry her?’  Azalar had hexed him with a tongue-sticking spell for being disrespectful, but Beatrice had nodded seriously, and said, ‘Yes, it was a stupid decision to make.  But lots of people have the problem of loving someone who can’t love them in that way, and can’t accept the friendship that their beloved could give them, or go on to find out who is the right person for them to marry.’

Now, everything was a blackened ruin, without even the beginnings of weeds thrusting through.  It looked almost as though it had been attacked by a dragon.  Gardas remembered a lesson on dragons once: how Black dragons were among the most dangerous variety, although they were smaller than blues, because their fire was so destructive; Blue dragons’ fire could burn and injure, but Black dragons’ fire could devastate land so that it was permanently cursed, or inflict injuries that could not be healed either by natural means, or by any human magic.  Only the healing fire of a silvery Grey dragon, larger than any variety save the Golds, could undo a Black dragon’s curse.  Perhaps Paul had been injured by a dragon?  It would explain why no healer had restored him to normal.

‘Gardas!  Are you paying attention?’ snapped the inquisitor.

‘Sorry, sir,’ said Gardas again.

‘As I was saying, before I or anyone else questions you any further, you need to drink this truth potion.  I must remind the court that the defendant’s testimony will not necessarily give the true facts of what actually happened, but will reveal the truth as it appears to him.  I must also remind everyone that those under the influence of a truth potion are easily distracted, and so it is important that nobody else calls out, or questions the defendant without my permission.  Now, Gardas, are you ready?’

‘Yes, sir,’ Gardas managed, in a strangled grunt.  A younger, female wizard lifted the cup of bitter potion to Gardas’s lips (he had known it would taste bitter, so had he been interrogated like this before?).

As Gardas drank, he began to realise that there was nothing really to worry about.  After all, they were all his friends here, even if some of them were friends he’d never met.  He grinned, his tongue lolling like a dog’s, as he got ready to tell his tale.


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